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To Believe…

29 Jun

i was once there
i used to believe
if i would just fall
then id soon be free

if i could just wait
then you would soon see
the wonderful things
inside of me

i waited and felt
i tried to be free
but then you were him
and wouldnt believe

so i grew and i cried
i felt so ashamed
i had to grow up
and be my own name

i grew up and flourished
i was always the one
but in your minds eye
i was just for fun

now that its over
it still hurts inside
but i take each day
in great big strides

but then i met her
and she crys as i cried
and feels inside
as she might die

because in her heart
she craves to be free
she was hoping that he
would soon believe

i give her my shoulder
my words dont make sense
in her opinion
these words are too dense

one day she will see
she will fall and be free
if only she'd learned
in herself to believe.
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14 Comments

Posted by on June 29, 2011 in dating, Dreams, my soul mate

 

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14 responses to “To Believe…

  1. Jingle

    July 1, 2011 at 7:55 pm

    what a thrill to see you in,
    very eloquent words..
    Happy Rally.

     
  2. David Rheins

    July 1, 2011 at 8:16 pm

    I especially like the photography!

     
  3. charlesmashburn

    July 1, 2011 at 8:31 pm

    I am a strong believer in believing in one’s self. You’ve said things I feel, and said them well. Nicely done!

     
  4. frozenicequeen

    July 2, 2011 at 6:21 am

    What a thought seizing topic “)
    Great choice of words ….
    Your thoughts resemble mine 🙂

     
  5. Cassiopeia Rises

    July 2, 2011 at 3:10 pm

    Powerful words and imagery. Excellent!

    Melanie

     
  6. acoustic3

    July 2, 2011 at 9:31 pm

    The photo goes perfectly with the poem. Amazingly emotional.

     
  7. Jacqui Binford-Bell

    July 3, 2011 at 11:04 am

    Loved the first stanza:

    i was once there
    i used to believe
    if i would just fall
    then id soon be free

    Sometimes that feeling still returns to me so I stay away from high cliffs.

     
  8. mindlovemisery

    July 4, 2011 at 9:14 am

    Such a sad sad poem, if only we did believe in ourselves and listen to those healthy inner voices instead of succumbing to the voices of Depression and such

     
  9. Uneven Stephen

    July 4, 2011 at 2:07 pm

    Great poem. I love how it comes full circle at the end.

     
  10. Helena (Hey! Lena)

    July 4, 2011 at 8:37 pm

    Not enough of us believe in ourselves – me included! I loved the piece and the pic!

     
  11. SamaraMarie

    July 7, 2011 at 11:17 pm

    I enjoyed reading your poem, and I like how the photograph captures the theme. It conveys true emotions and teaches a lesson at the same time.

     
  12. Andy

    July 8, 2011 at 9:43 pm

    We have to believe in ourselves before we can trust & believe in others.

    Nicely expressed!

     
  13. Bluebell Books

    July 9, 2011 at 11:18 pm

    how are you?

    invite you to take our week 5 writing challenge,
    anything comes to mind would be awesome to share,
    smiles.
    hope to see your in.
    Happy Saturday.

    keep up the excellence.

     
  14. WyomingDiva

    July 10, 2011 at 12:01 am

    Oh, loved this!

     

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