Which part…

24 Aug

One wish
Which part
So many parts
Of this climb
The hike
So steep
Which part
Is worth this fall
The fall
So far
Far from the truth
The truth
I tell
The lies
Which lies
Beneath the floor
So floored
The truth…
It lies.


Posted by on August 24, 2010 in Uncategorized


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5 responses to “Which part…

  1. Diamonds & Dogs

    August 24, 2010 at 2:49 pm

    Very well done…

  2. Jingle

    August 25, 2010 at 5:06 pm


  3. Raven

    August 30, 2010 at 11:45 am

    I like how this flows.

  4. Trisha

    September 6, 2010 at 3:35 pm

    very, very beautiful.

  5. Jingle

    September 24, 2010 at 3:00 pm

    hello, friend:

    I invite you to Attend Thursday Poets Rally Week 29, linking in a poem by commenting,

    Happy Friday!


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