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I Stood Still…

12 Jul

I stood still too long
Vines wound around me
Now with eyes covered
True love I can’t see

Beyond the green
Is a world outside
I should have moved
At least have tried

I’ll gain control
And cut them down
I won’t stop ’til
I’m on solid ground.

-BC

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2 Comments

Posted by on July 12, 2010 in Uncategorized

 

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2 responses to “I Stood Still…

  1. slpmartin

    July 12, 2010 at 5:27 pm

    Interesting thesis of what happens when you just stand around waitng for life rather than living it…enjoyed reading this one.

     
  2. buttercup600

    July 13, 2010 at 12:33 am

    Awesome heartfelt poem… on solid ground!! Loved it ~ Hugs x

     

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