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Walking On Glass…

04 Jul

I walk on glass
And hold it inside
How I feel
I show you a lie

I want to share
This life we have
Not as a friend
My hearts in half

It kills me inside
To think that my life
Will be taken away
Another girl your wife

These beautiful kids
Who steal my heart
If you leave
Will tear me apart

I’m not only falling
For the man before me
I’m falling
For the family we could be.
-BC

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8 Comments

Posted by on July 4, 2010 in Uncategorized

 

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8 responses to “Walking On Glass…

  1. slpmartin

    July 4, 2010 at 11:08 pm

    Ah…you address such a difficult situation in your poem and capture the emotion well with your metaphor of walking on glass…very nicely framed.

     
    • brokensally

      July 5, 2010 at 12:12 am

      Glad to see I’m not the only one on wordpress on the 4th. Lol…

       
  2. mitchicus

    July 5, 2010 at 3:36 am

    This really speaks to me. wonderful work!

     
  3. Fatesjoke03

    July 6, 2010 at 4:12 am

    Wow, not sure what else to say on this one.

     
  4. ziibi

    July 6, 2010 at 10:39 am

    Well done. 🙂

     
  5. waystationone

    July 6, 2010 at 9:06 pm

    oh my…a tough situation…makes me think from the other side…

     
  6. Leonie

    July 7, 2010 at 1:36 am

    Ohhhh, that packs a punch. Great opening, great ending, great rhyming… just all-around great.

     
  7. Jingle

    July 7, 2010 at 1:43 am

    wonderful job!

     

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