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Hair Turns Black…

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Hair turns black
As heart turns cold
Maps on hands
As I grow old.
-BC

Always looking
For whom I’ll never be
Moments passing
Away from me.
-BC

Sitting alone now
Waiting for prince charming now
When will he come? Now.
-BC

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16 Comments

Posted by on June 9, 2010 in Uncategorized

 

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16 responses to “Hair Turns Black…

  1. fiveloaf

    June 9, 2010 at 6:30 pm

    great writing..

     
  2. suzicate

    June 9, 2010 at 11:36 pm

    sad reflection of feeling like life is passing you by and not getting what you want..nice flow.

     
  3. soulintention: signed .............bkm

    June 10, 2010 at 1:01 am

    very well done……take it from me, wait not on anyone….live, love…laugh-….bkm

     
  4. Jingle

    June 10, 2010 at 3:35 am

    vivid and fun!

     
  5. Seth

    June 10, 2010 at 11:07 am

    well done. I agree with soulintention. Never wait on anyone. always charge forward!

     
  6. trisha

    June 10, 2010 at 11:42 am

    really beautiful 🙂

     
  7. luna12780

    June 10, 2010 at 12:00 pm

    Very impressive choice of words and style.

     
  8. dustus

    June 10, 2010 at 12:28 pm

    Very well written lines. Enjoyed them all, especially the first poem…
    “Hair turns black / As heart turns cold / Maps on hands / As I grow old.”
    Well captured description of aging.

     
  9. Bing (PinkLady)

    June 10, 2010 at 2:12 pm

    i love the first one but these are all lovely poems. thought provoking ones, i must say. =)

     
  10. Tim Keeton

    June 10, 2010 at 2:17 pm

    Nice work!

    Thanks for visiting my site as well.

    Rhyme on!

    Tim Keeton
    (Undead)Poet / Wizard / Teller-of-tales

     
  11. brian

    June 10, 2010 at 5:56 pm

    some great stuff there…maps on the hand is a great line!

     
  12. Jingle

    June 10, 2010 at 6:10 pm

    have a fun Thursday!

     
  13. wordwand

    June 10, 2010 at 7:37 pm

    a good job! lovely lines; beautifully sad! well done Sally

     
  14. jingle

    June 11, 2010 at 3:42 pm

    thank you for the nomination of five loaf!
    Happy Friday!

     
  15. goatgirlbookworm

    June 15, 2010 at 6:38 pm

    Very nice! (little typo on he)

     
    • brokensally

      June 15, 2010 at 6:47 pm

      Thanks… typing on a cell can be difficult.

       

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