Eyes Closed…

09 Jun


Eyes closed
There you are
Eyes open
Where did you go
Eyes closed
You smile at me
Eyes open
The room is empty
Eyes closed
You reach out toward me
Eyes open
People filing in
Eyes closed
We are alone now
Eyes open
They are walking toward you
Eyes closed
I can hear you whisper
Eyes open
They whisper prayers
Eyes closed
You put your arms around me
Eyes open
They offer condolences
Eyes closed
Hold me forever
Eyes open
Let me go…


Posted by on June 9, 2010 in Uncategorized


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5 responses to “Eyes Closed…

  1. Jingle

    June 9, 2010 at 5:51 pm

    creative thoughts,
    very vivid and animated.

  2. Jingle

    June 9, 2010 at 5:52 pm


    week 21 the perfect poet award reminder, read rules to accept the award please, at least comment to let me know a poet you wish to nominate for week 22.
    we require a minimum visits to 18 poets to be done for Rally from week 22 to week 42.
    Thank you in advance!

  3. slpmartin

    June 9, 2010 at 7:36 pm

    Again you write a very fine poem…clever use of wording.

  4. alexvonfox

    June 10, 2010 at 3:16 am

    i agree with slp good use of wording – rminded me of when things are so close but out of reach

  5. theonlycin

    June 10, 2010 at 12:36 pm

    Very clever, conjures up the contrasting scenes.


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