I Just Realized!

06 Jun

In this moment I realized

I’m a super cool dork

Sitting alone at a bar

I suddenly look up.

Surrounded by people

Yet I’m still alone

Pen & notebook in hand

Writing down my poem.

They probably sit and wonder

Who is that girl?

Who feels no pressure

alone in the world.

Comfortable with her laptop

With her pad, pen, paper and beer

No one knows the real truth

I wish you were here.



Posted by on June 6, 2010 in Uncategorized


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5 responses to “I Just Realized!

  1. Jingle

    June 6, 2010 at 2:39 am

    it is nice to feel alone at times.
    awesome capture of your feelings!

  2. trisha

    June 6, 2010 at 5:58 am

    This is beautiful. you portrayed your feelings perfectly.

    I am here from Jingle’s Thursday Rally for poets.
    Peace n happiness 4U 4Ever.

  3. D.S. Lear

    June 7, 2010 at 2:20 am

    Beautifully heartfelt!

  4. dustus

    June 10, 2010 at 12:22 pm

    Can relate. Thanks for making me feel better by considering sitting at a bar alone writing being a “super cool dork.”


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