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The Sunset Fades…

03 Jun

The sunset fades
Like memories too
As time goes by
I think less of you.

As shadows do cast
No more brilliant light
As my love for you
Day becomes night.

-BC

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6 Comments

Posted by on June 3, 2010 in Uncategorized

 

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6 responses to “The Sunset Fades…

  1. Joe Suzz

    June 3, 2010 at 9:42 pm

    wow, the imagery of the sunset for a fading love is beautiful. thanks for sharing.
    Enjoy the rally,
    joe

     
  2. mairmusic

    June 3, 2010 at 11:15 pm

    perfect use of a quatrain! I loved how the last line of each gave a twist to the rest.
    http://mairmusic.wordpress.com/

     
  3. almondjoycie

    June 4, 2010 at 1:07 pm

    That happens sometimes! You have captured that moment when things no longer matter. Very nice.

     
  4. moondustwriter

    June 4, 2010 at 3:39 pm

    lost love sad and then it fades sader still

    thanks for the visit

    Happy Weekend

     
  5. Jingle

    June 4, 2010 at 5:53 pm

    rich sentiments.
    cool poem!

     
  6. trisha

    June 4, 2010 at 8:57 pm

    i can feel your pain.

     

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