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I Saw You…

21 May

Inspired by one of the poets on wordpress I’m going to attempt a different style… comments always welcome.

I saw you
You saw me
There was a
Moment
When
It was
Just us
& no one
Else
No one
To interfere
Out of
Sight
Passions
Burst into
Hot flames
Emotions
A blaze
Passion
Feelings
Excitement
And then
Your moment
Clarity
Memory
But it all
Came to late
Invested
Part of
Each others
Energy….

-BC

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1 Comment

Posted by on May 21, 2010 in Uncategorized

 

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One response to “I Saw You…

  1. slpmartin

    May 21, 2010 at 3:17 pm

    I like the way you tell this story with the phrase structure you elected to use..was I think very effective.

     

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